Wednesday, 25 March 2015

The 100 Word Challenge




My Reflection:
I loved this activity because... we got use our imagination and think of a story that related to the picture.  The thing that was tricky for me was coming up with the title,  I think the next step for me might be to make it actually get 100 words. (Have a beautiful Easter every one who is reading this:)      

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Wow, what a great story Oliver, I love it! It is quite hard limiting a story to 100 words, I think you did really well to get it this close to 100.

Mrs Hodge said...

Your story certainly was exciting- it had me "hooked" like that fish...

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